Throughout this great design of things you'll receive  a B- with regard to hard work. Where exactly you confused us was in all the facts. You know,  it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more true in this article. Having said that, allow me say to you just what did work. The text can be rather engaging and this is probably why I am taking an effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, even though I can see a jumps in logic you make, I am not really sure of exactly how you appear to unite the ideas that help to make the actual final result. For the moment I will subscribe to your issue however wish in the future you connect your dots better.