In the great pattern of things you'll secure  a B- just for effort. Exactly where you actually confused me was first on your facts. You know,  it is said, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be more correct here. Having said that, permit me say to you exactly what did do the job. The article (parts of it) can be highly persuasive which is possibly why I am taking an effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, even though I can certainly notice the leaps in reasoning you come up with, I am not certain of exactly how you seem to unite the details which inturn help to make the actual final result. For right now I will, no doubt yield to your issue however hope in the foreseeable future you actually link the dots better.