In the grand design of things you actually secure  a B+ just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you misplaced me personally was first on the particulars. You know,  it is said, the devil is in the details... And it could not be more true in this article. Having said that, let me tell you what did give good results. The article (parts of it) is actually quite convincing and that is most likely the reason why I am taking the effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, even though I can certainly notice the jumps in reason you come up with, I am not really certain of how you appear to connect your details which help to make your conclusion. For the moment I shall yield to your position however hope in the foreseeable future you connect the dots better.